Life was amazing,
Everything felt right,
Nothing’s changed,
But there’s just this lost and empty feeling inside,
No words to express what’s going through this mind,
And no actions to show the feelings in this heart,
There’s so much that needs to be done,
So much that needs to be said,
But instead silence and laziness is all that’s been felt.
There’s just a haze and such confusion,
Eyes are wandering, searching for a conclusion,
Not for the end, but just for this chapter,
So the pages can be turned,
And the story can continue.
It feels like the answer is near,
As much as now would be great,
I don’t want to Jeopardize what it could be,
There will be a moment when the timing will be perfect,
Just got to stay strong and believe everything will fall into place,
And remember everything happens for a reason.
Good job with this poem! I’m a little confused at some parts but it’s still a good poem. If I could ask what your message was for this poem, what would that be?
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Thank you for your comment and like ☺️
To be honest, my posts are just my thoughts put down and shared. So many are confusing, I don’t blame you. ☺️
Although I’d really like to first know what you got out of it, if you don’t mind? ☺️
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Totally. So my only initial thought was this person has grown up and is settled down in their life. However, their life has no excitement which is why pages are not being turned. It’s the same page again and again. So then this person really wants to get to the next page, but maybe he/she might lose their peace? But in the end the person decides not to interfere with their destiny. How did I do 🙂
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Perfect ☺️
You’re good at decoding confusing posts ☺️ Sorry for making you think about it… I’ll try my best to make them a little easier to understand next time 😳
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❤ 😀 Nice~ It's all good. It's a really great poem 🙂
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Thank you ☺️☺️
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good read..
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Thank you ☺️
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Very beautifully written and resonated with me very much. Depicts so many emotions and yet confusion at the same time.
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Thank you so much ☺️
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